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Life's a river.
…and I'm floating downstream without a boat.
My soaking clothes weigh me down while sapping my warmth.
The careless rapids crash upon me
as haphazard currents speed my travel.
Rocks and falls and floating debris –
I survive it all
only to be battered by storms where the river meets the sea.
Lightning cracks all around and I am lucky to draw breath as the storm clears.
I am tired and my strength is gone as I sink into the ocean.
The onslaught is over.
…and I'm floating downstream without a boat.
My soaking clothes weigh me down while sapping my warmth.
The careless rapids crash upon me
as haphazard currents speed my travel.
Rocks and falls and floating debris –
I survive it all
only to be battered by storms where the river meets the sea.
Lightning cracks all around and I am lucky to draw breath as the storm clears.
I am tired and my strength is gone as I sink into the ocean.
The onslaught is over.
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Again, not too sure this is classified properly... Just a little ditty with a cliched title and a story that doesn't go with.
November, 2006
November, 2006
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Very nice, seems classified well to me. Again, very nice work.